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These are just things that have peaked my interest lately. Fanfics from Avatar: the last Airbender, Poems on occasion, stamps when inspired, my own writing, photos, manipulations, and whatever else flows from my pen works.

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I love showing off my friends work and anything amazing I fav more than showing off my work. :aww: Sorry, I just don't think I'm all that good.


This took longer than expected. This story is longer than I thought it was. :XD: Then he brought the blade up into a defensive stance, and...

Hello! :wave: I'm =paintedbluerose from :iconwriters--club: to critique your story. To be honest, I'm surprissed you asked for critique on this. It's not some...

I critique literature. Short stories and such. :) If you need/want something critiqued, let me know.
13 deviants said YES! I so agree with everything!
2 deviants said I agree, sorta, kinda... :shrug:
1 deviant said Other...
No deviants said That's so wrong. Not even true! :no:




Twilight. It's that gay.

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Melissa Rose
Artist | Student | Literature
United States
I love her by 1FoxyladyPaintedbluerose Stamp by avatar-shrey <--I love the amazing stamps people make for me. :love:

:wave: Hi there! My name is Melissa Rose, but you can call me Mel, Melissa, Rose, or whatever else you want. :P I'm a writer and hope to be published one day. :shrug: We'll see.

I love writing and critiquing. :aww: :love: If you would like something critiqued, let me know. ;) I'll help out what I can. But to warn you: I am honest and sometimes harsh. I'm not going to hold your hand.

I also do a little photomanipulations and make some stamps as well. I love taking photos as well, but not too many of those make it here. :P I love writing the most though. :love: I started here on dA with fan fiction for a show "Avatar: the Last Airbender". For the most part, I thought I stopped it. :P Then, "Legend of Korra" was announced and well, ^^; I'm back a bit to writing it again. Thankfully, I also write other things as well. I have my own stories here, short stories and small multi-chapters, as well as poems. :aww: I love poetry. :love::love: Pretty much anything and everything. I draw a little, but it's not very good. ^^; Sorry.

I love to read and have a long list of books that I've read, but can't remember all of them. ^^; My bad. Thus the amazon review links:… :love: It helps me out a ton! :XD: Also, if you want to get me anything on the wish list, that's always awesome. :innocent: Just saying.

I'm also on other sites as well:
youtube: (aguarosa)…
Y!A: (Wishful Thinking)
Uh... I know there are others as well, but I can't recall all of them right now. ^^; Sorry. Also, my name changes on each one depending on my mood. :XD:

Feel free to email me for any help or just to talk.


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Donations go towards gifting subs to random deviants. :aww: And whatever else my heart desires.

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The Help

Journal Entry: Sat Aug 13, 2011, 5:37 PM

I think it's strange I only update recently for movies. :| Is that saying something about me?

Moving on, The Help was a pretty good movie. :love: It's based off of the book "The Help" and takes place in the 1960s Jackson, Mississippi. I personally loved the book and was excited to see this movie come out. There were times in the movie that were very funny :laughing: and the audience was laughing like crazy and there were also times that were more dramatic. Really, it's a good movie and I did enjoy watching it. It's about two hours and seventeen minutes long. Average length for a movie.  Strange thing, it's actually longer than Rise of the Planet of the Apes. :shifty:

What I didn't like about the movie was that there were a couple times that it didn't follow the book about what happened and the movie ended too happy. If you know that time period and that area, you know there isn't going to be a happy ending for most stories, but this one did. :shrug:  Even more than in the book. Also, I think some of the timing of certain things was off, but that's also the case in the book. :shrug:

So… read the book, watch the movie, and all that jazz. :P

Other news:
:bulletblue: I seriously need to practice more with the photomanips, but my brain is fried. :XD: So, anyone wanting to help me practice and would like a photomanip done, please let me know. :love:  I don't mind taking requests for them.

:bulletred: I'm also happy because I just finished painting my room today. :love: Just took me how long? :roll: But now, I'm tired, sore and covered in paint. :no: Maybe I'll actually post a picture or two of what I did with my room. :P Or not… I still have a few other pictures to post if I remember. :no: I doubt I will.

:bulletyellow: And I'm still going through my list of deviations. I'm random with that. :P If you've been waiting for me, I'm coming. Slowly, but I am. I also would like to post a couple of Tokka Week fics that I never got a chance to post before. :( Maybe later… I also do have some poems as well…

I think that's it. If not, I'll have to make a new journal. :XD:

  • Mood: Agony
  • Listening to: Silence
  • Reading: Psychology book
  • Eating: Chocolate
  • Drinking: Smirnoff

Gifts for me

Commission paintedbluerose by CoppeliaDwhat's next? by Tobinin Selena and Ivan colored by debbie07zutara_Massage_outline_colored by silver-scorpianWintery Gift by DeviBrigardfor paintedbluerose by happyzukoGift for paintedbluerose by CaranthRequest for Paintedbluerose by shinigami-no-negaiI love explosions by myah5000 Happy birthday Rose :D by Awoken-myth For RoseHer gaze pierced through him like a knife, and he couldn’t help but look away.
Bad idea.
He could practically feel the anger building up in her, and immediately wanted to be somewhere else, anywhere but here. But then, when she spoke her voice was calm and cold, not the loud yelling he expected it to be.
“I thought we promised each other no more secrets.” She said, her burning blue eyes never moving from his own golden ones. He reluctantly turned to face her again, trying to hold back the nervousness that swept him. He had to open his mouth a few times before he was able to retain full use of his vocal chords.
“Er, well, I know, but, this secret… needed to be kept.” He said, somewhat lamely. He realized instantly that this was not the best thing to say, as she immediately flared up again, and this time she was yelling.
“How could you, Zuko?! I trusted you! How could you do something like that?! Maybe I shouldn’t have trusted you- maybe that was m
Blood and Roses CSS by myah5000 RoseWho knew I would find such a good friend in a random person I had never met in person?
A simple fan fiction on the orange and green web site for the kid channel that had reigned for years in the minds of little kids watching cartoons. There, on that fan fiction thread, I made my own story about the avatar come to life, along with this new found friend. “The Last Fight” seemed an interesting enough title. I had no clue how this epic tale would give me a new friendship with an amazing writer.
That simple reply about the show’s main antagonist and the writer’s lovely style began a correspondence on both that thread, my fan fiction thread, and led us to this website. Through it all, we wrote two word replies about characters, our normal lives off the computer, and everything related to this show that compelled our minds for so long. Her fic ended, and she started the sequel, while I continued to slave away on my own, which is still not finished currently. She began writ


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This is my list to keep track of things. If you would like a request, please NOTE me as to what you would like. :love: I love requests and art trades.
What is it that I do? I write (fan fiction, literature, poetry, etc), I do photomanipulations, I do stamps, and I take photos. I have done a few drawings, but not enough and I'm not that good at them. Please don't ask for those.

Fan Fiction:

-Redo "Tempt" :star-empty:
-Edit "I'm asking you" :star-empty:
-Edit Burned Alive :star-half:

-None currently

-Steampunk :star-empty:


~More stories, poems and stamps in process.~

Disclaimer: Please note that not all of these will be in said order. Don't let the stars fool you either. I write and post whatever inspires me most of all. Please note as well that although I don't mind requests or art trades, I do have the right to say no to any I don't like or don't want to write. I also do have a life and may not be able to post requests as soon as possible. Please don't be upset if it doesn't come out right away or I have something out sooner.

Suicide Prevention Stamp by Tobi-the-grim-meeperfibromyalgia stamp by KazekohDepression by StampboxScoliosis Stamp by XxXPrincessIzzyXxXInsomnia Stamp by shadowlight-oakAsthma Stamp by CrimsonMeg5002P.C.O.S. Awareness by GieGie:thumb177924529:Arthritis Awareness Stamp by Fairytale-Heart


Mon Jul 22, 2013, 11:25 PM
SHOUT!! :eager:
Sat Dec 15, 2012, 7:11 PM
Happy Birthday! :cake:
Sat Jul 14, 2012, 11:10 PM
When are you coming back? :tears:
Sat Jun 9, 2012, 1:13 AM
:wave: I see a foxy lady in here. ;)
Tue Apr 3, 2012, 5:12 AM


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Felzm Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi again, my appreciated friend Rose, and Very Happy Birthday, :)!!!
:wave: :clap: :clap: :clap:, :hug:s and greetings, :party: and :cake:!!! :)
Have a great time on this your special day, my appreciated friend Rose, :)!!!
Jazmin-Jazz Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy brithday!! :D have an amazing day ! Best wishes :D 
LittleCupofCocoa Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
:iconsayhiplz: Thank you for the fav! Check out my profile if you're interested in commissioning/requesting me! :heart:
mythstify Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student Filmographer
thank you for the watch~!! :iconhurrplz:
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mizubender Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! :D Hope you have a great day! :hug:
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Felzm Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi again, my dear friend Mel Rose, :)!!! See, I was remembered by the site about the great celebration you are having now, and for that, me as all your another friends who have done it already and I hope the another do the same too, :) I went here to your profile in order to congratulate the cute girl of the Birthday, so efussive as possible, hoping you like and you enjoy it, :), so here I go :sing: "Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday dear Mel Rose, Happy Birthday to you!!!" :wave: :clap: :clap: :clap:, :tighthug:s and kisses, :party: and :cake:!!! Have a great time on this your special day, my dear friend, :)!!!
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lloya012 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Happy Birthday~!! :iconrainbowbummiecakeplz:
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glowingqueen Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Happy early birthday, paintedbluerose! Stay awesome!
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sarumanka Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you somuch for the watch! :hug:
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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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